viernes, 3 de noviembre de 2023

EDW5 "Careers" Theme FORUM

"Careers" FORUM

 

1. Primera participación: Diseña una vacante ideal (100-120 palabras). Describe la visión de la empresa usando will, las tareas usando going to, e incluye planes de vacaciones, predicciones del clima y expresiones de tiempo:

At Everest Explorers, we will lead the future of sustainable ecotourism. We will protect natural habitats while creating unforgettable holiday adventures. As a Wilderness Guide, you are going to lead small groups on scenic hikes. You are going to implement eco-friendly practices every day. Since holiday trips depend on nature, it is going to be sunny during peak season, but if it rains, we will provide waterproof equipment. We offer monthly insurance and travel bonuses. In the coming months, we are going to expand to South America. Eventually, our company will offer expeditions on all seven continents!

2. Segunda participación: Responde a un compañero (100-120 palabras) negociando tu ingreso o inversión. Usa el condicional cero y primero:

Hi! Your vacant post is perfect for me. If I join your team, I will help promote your green vision. Usually, if a company respects nature, I feel motivated to work harder. If relocation is available, I will move to your headquarters next month. I love leading holiday groups in nature. If employees follow safety rules, they always stay safe during trips, even when weather conditions change. What will happen if I send my resume today? I am ready to start this journey with you. Let's talk!

Audio link: https://voca.ro/1h71FgOUFCGO
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4 comentarios :

  1. Job offer: Matemáticas teather

    Our compa y we are looking for a mathemathics teather with good communication skills to reach children between 10 and 11 years of age.

    Main responsibilities and conditions:

    1. The new teacher si going yo create educational materials that the community can use later.

    2. Traveling to the workplace under any weather conditions present in the area.

    3. If it is winter the teacher will stay at the institution for several days due to access problems.

    4. Teacher will attend meetings with parents whenever it is necessary and prudent.

    5. On days off an holidays food and accommodation will be provided if the teacher decides not to leave the facilites.

    6. Teacher vacations are fully paid but the institution will close during the established dates.

    Thanks.

    https://voca.ro/17JUbyPApUBM

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    1. Hello, LEINY!

      Good job completing both entries and including both audio links! You wrote 215 total words, and your idea about a math teacher in a remote area is very thoughtful.

      This is a partial grade. To improve your score, please adjust a few things:

      Typo Fixes: Watch out for spelling in Part 1 (for example: math teacher instead of teather, and is going to instead of si going yo).

      Use Conditionals in Part 2: In your reply to Everest Explorers, use if clauses to negotiate your position (for example: If I join your team, I will help protect nature...).

      Company Vision (will): In Part 1, include a sentence about what your company will achieve in the future (for example: Our school will expand to other towns soon).

      You are doing good work! Please update your post to get a higher score.

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  2. I would like to join Everest Explorers because creating a positive work environment is key especially as we perform sustainable ecotourism that protects nature while providing people with unforgettable experiences.

    On the other hand as someone passionate about the environment it gives me great satisfaction to implement eco friendly practices that visitors will spread around the world helping us improve our planet step by step.

    Moreover, experiencing every weather condition is going to make each day a new learning experience and a continuous exploration of the ecosystem.

    https://voca.ro/1gwn49XQOKbu

    Thanks

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    1. Leiny, here is a complete breakdown for your evidence grading: Word Count: 215 words total. Audio Links/Files Check: ✅ Present Template Usage: 🟰 Partial. LEARNER Future with "will" and with "going to" 🟰 Time expressions for the past/present/future 🟰 The zero and the first conditionals 🟰 Plans for holidays & Weather Predictions ✅ Cloning Model Text: 🟢 Low Risk. AI Copy-Pasting: 🟢 Low Risk. Instructional Alignment: 🟡 Mid Risk.

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